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Canticle by SIRE-N Canticle by SIRE-N
A small excerpt from one of my poems.
You can download it to get the full resolution.

Let me know what you all think. (:



Mask & Upper Hand: From my own personal stock. I purchased the mask in Venice last year
at Carnevale di Venezia and I've been wanting to incorporate its design somewhere in my art.
I really like how well it meshes.

Lower Hand Refs: :icond-is-for-duck: & :iconahtibat-stock:
Blood Texture: Package - Blood Soaked - 3 by resurgere
Sheet Music Texture: :iconjusticestock:
Font: www.dafont.com/celtic-garamond… (I edited it slightly)
Background Texture: This was a random texture I found without a listed artist. If you know
of the artist, please notify me.



Tools: Wacom Intuos5 Tablet & SAI
Hours: 8



Hound of Shadows by SIRE-NHell Hound by SIRE-N Outcast by SIRE-N Punishment by SIRE-N Liar, Liar by SIRE-N



Art: ©SIRE-N
Poetry: ©SIRE-N

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Do not redistribute, claim, copy,
edit or use it any way. Thank you~
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Critique by hall0ws0fhell Feb 25, 2013, 8:03:34 AM
I honestly don't have much negative to say about this. The piece has really good depth, and is most definitely an A in terms of impact.

The only reason I gave if half stars on terms of technique and impact was that generally in my opinion the whole of the piece, or at least the guts of it, should be the focus.

Instead, the starkness of the hands tend to draw the eye to the lower left. Working by the rule of thirds, there's absolutely nothing that really draws the eye to the actual text disregarding the hand in the highest position. It kind of makes it seem a bit forced when you finally drag your eye from the visual aspects and shunts the text and intention to the backburner.

All in all, I love your work, and this piece is no exception.
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Erikavaan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful. can't find the words.
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thewatcher509 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Depth And Darkness Intertwined
The Image Perceives The Image
On My Mind

I Hope This Poem Finds You Well,
Now,I Await The Stories You Will Tell.
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SIRE-N Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, quite the talented writer you are.
Loved it. <3
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thewatcher509 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Thank You Kind Sir
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camilah Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
This is cool:)
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SIRE-N Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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camilah Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Welcome
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your work is so amazingly deep and dark... :blackrose: I love all of it so much. It's so beautiful. :heart:
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SIRE-N Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
I sincerely thank you. <3
Your kindness is always appreciated quite deeply.
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're always welcome. :heart:
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